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My Final Words

I hear your cries
As I spread my wings
To the night skies
The sorrow angel sings
A song of our bittersweet love
Only to be torn apart
By the forces of above
I give you now, and forever, my heart
Even now as I lie in your arms
My soul is rising to the gates
Lost to all the earth’s harms
The life we shared destroyed by fates
Do not fear for me my love
For I go to a better place
Higher than the day’s sky blue
Finally to see the creator’s face
Alas, my breath is slowing fast
Your eyes brimming with salty tears
Along the path is our joyous past
You hold on tighter, giving into fears
The beating of my heart is ending
The life in me is draining away
I can see my judgment pending
As your grip upon me begins to sway
With these words, I bid my farewell
The loves of the heaven’s reach
Is whispering that this is my place to dwell
Until you my one, will make the breach
Between the border of life and death
The sweet song of the birds
Fail to cover with my last breath
The love of my final words
Goodbye dear angel, goodbye  

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A poem I wrote for St. Valentine's Day.

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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    May 22, 2007

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    this was a great write and i really enjoyed reading this...this flowed really well and your words were strong, powerful and emotional as well..keep writting your talented and good luck in the contest

    ~Chrissy~

  • OurxBeginning
    May 21, 2007

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    I thought this was very different and creative. I liked how you intertwined the love and darkness. Your rhyming was also done well. Thanks for entering and good luck.


  • Laura
    May 19, 2007

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    whis is very beautiful and the imagery i got from this was amazing very well done indeed good luck in the contest xx