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Winter

The sky's streaked with grey,
Cold, hard rain begins to fall
And the wind picks up.

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  • DrunkenRam
    December 27, 2007

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    YAAAYYYY! Finally! someone who knows how to spell Grey.
    I was taught "Grey" is the color, "Gray" is a Name.
    And, I Love Winter, And I love Freezing rain
    You get an A+ for this one.


  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    The sky's streaked with grey,
    Cold, hard rain begins to fall
    And the wind picks up.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. I think I would be happy right now if it was warm enough to rain rather than snow here.


  • Pink Absinthe
    May 14, 2007
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    i like how u get the mind thinking wit this, very tempting!
    =]
    x


  • midnight oil
    May 14, 2007
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    yes

    This is slightly better than from the clssroom. I like the pictures you have conjured up-thats my favourite thing about poetry anyway! Will you please rate my 'Im a Fool to let it show'? Its somewhere on my page!! Id be really grateful!