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Out Of My Window

Dappled in sunlight
Beneath a quivering tree
A lone rose stands bare.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Dappled in sunlight
    Beneath a quivering tree
    A lone rose stands bare.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is very well written and it surely paints a very vivid picture.


  • sheltered gold member
    June 11, 2007
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    I feel for that rose. Great job.


  • Pink Absinthe
    May 17, 2007
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    aw thats really cute!!!!!!
    well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    very beautiful!

  • LaurenLightning--x
    May 14, 2007

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    This is beautiful.
    I love haikus. I use to write them all the time. Especially about scences such this.
    This is fantastic, the immagery is immense.

    Well done!! I love this.

    KetFace - Magic xX