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This Heart Shaped Ring

This heart shaped ring,
Your expression of your love.
Has brought me to tears,
Why do I have feelings this way?

You love me,
But I do not love you,
Why am I crying?
When I have no feelings for you?

You asked me to never leave you.
But I can't keep this promise.
What if I love someone else?
And never consider you again?

Thank you for the ring,
I think it's quite beautiful,
But I'll wear it as your friend,
And not as your love.

Because I cannot love you,
For we just met.

Author notes

Undetermined love. This is about a guy I met like 3 days ago, and he already said he loves me... Lol. It's kind of funny though, because I barely know him and he gives me this HUGE pink heart shaped ring. Omg, I think I'm going to cry again, because I Don't love him!

But thanks for reading, this is how I feel write now.

Ugh.... Please give me some advice.

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  • CaPtAiN JaCk17
    May 15, 2007
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    This is a very good write. This is one of the hardest feelings to describe and have, and i can relate. I had someone who felt very strongly, like love, for me and I didnt feel it back. If you met the guy three days prior, i doubt he really loves you. Keep your chin up, and you'll be fine. good write.

  • pozo
    May 14, 2007

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    Good write. Hmm, I don't think he can truly love you even if he thinks he does- it IS a little soon. Keep the ring, it's a nice compliment.
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo