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Lady Blue

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Lady Blue

T he Blue Queen is the Raven, the queen bee,
ruling her kingdom upon royal throne.
Devout followers fall on bended knee,
extending passion for love she has shown.

The beauty of an immortal flower,
her throne room is filled with kindness and grace.
Feasting on crimson life to devour.
To be under her wing, safe in embrace.

Mortals don’t know of a vampires' love,
they don’t understand the passion you see.
Lady Blue rules her kingdom far above,
protecting her subjects, keeping them free.


So enter her castle and have no fear,
a vampires’ love is nothing austere.

 

 

Author notes

For AP poetess BlueIsisQueenRaven.

Sonnet

Sonnets are formal poems and consist of 14 lines (3 quatrains and a couplet) , traditionally written in iambic pentameter - that is, in lines ten syllables long, with accents falling on every second syllable.
source: shadowpoetry.com

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  • Desire gold member
    May 31, 2007

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    Sweeeeeeeeeet!!

    Oh My!! This is one Beautiful verse You have penned busy bee and that pen just flowed priceless
    Love the form and presentation You used!
    Brilliant!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!!
    I had a feeling I was missing a piece and went
    backwards to see~
    Yep..sure did...(gently smacks head)
    Ack!!!!!

    Congratulations on Your trophy win!
    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • xabbizzle
    May 25, 2007
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    this is brilliant. it rhymed so well and was written beautifully.


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    May 20, 2007
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    Fantastic! I love the classic feel of this piece. It draws you in and captivates. Bravo!


  • BlueIsisQueenRaven
    May 15, 2007

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    ~Many Scarlet Applauses and Kisses~

    This was absolutely amazing my sweet Amera.
    Thank you ever so much!

    It was a complete honor to have you dip
    deep into my world.
    And read accurately of a vampyres love.

    It is very rare indeed anyone can understand
    the comlexities which are rather simplistic
    once one comprehends.

    So enter her castle and have no fear,
    a vampires’ love is nothing austere.

    My favorite part as none know they must
    never have fear, for I always protect
    and adore passionately the ones,
    that are dear to my hearts soul.

    Fabulous and riveting.
    I am most most honored and
    oh so flattered.

    Thank you



    Lady Blue~


  • Aeonna
    May 15, 2007

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    whoa

    o' lady blue, i fear the darkness is upon me, another chilling cold masterpiece, your brillance is too bright, it's blinding me to see your great talent..


    red roses


  • Never Fall in Love
    May 15, 2007

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    Mortals don’t know of a vampires' love,
    they don’t understand the passion you see.

    AN Amazing write
    You make me fall short of words everytime
    Only because your poems touch brilliance at every level
    And they just keep getting better

    Lots of Love,
    NeveR <|3


  • blueyez
    May 15, 2007
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    This was a very majestic write!


  • Laura
    May 14, 2007

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    omg this is amazing totally and utterly amazing. can you teach me to write sonnets?? i wanna write like this lol very well done love i love it xxx
    laura xxx


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    May 14, 2007

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    You're sure into these sonnets at the moment and this one is as good, if not better, than the rest I've read from you of late. The picture is simply divine and compliments the poem well, a plain black background would help to match-up the reds Don't be surprised if you see this picture on one of my poems in the near future I'm taking it
    Thanks for sharing.
    La x


  • JohnnyD gold member
    May 14, 2007

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    A nice write for Lady Blue, rather nice indeed.

    And how is Lady Blue? Still walking in the sands,
    remembering of holding hands with an old love?

    I do wish you the best in your search,
    for a loved one upon whom you can perch.

    who knows, perhaps he still lives on Egyptian sands,
    or some other exotic land.

    perhaps he shall spot you first Lady Blue
    and then of your old love renew?

    JD


  • PerVirtuous
    May 14, 2007

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    Ohhhh. I likey. This is very sweet and dark, cold but tasty... Like chocolate ice cream. Yum. Three very scared bunnies for this!

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