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stretch of peace

 

she was spanish moss of rose,

to grow in petal bleak behind façade

of happy, in subtle situation buried

under stapled thumb

 

to try in might to save

such simple lives from break,

by venom dripping words oft spoke

in curse to wither sacred soul,

as dog in cur of cringe

to shrink itself into the floor

 

and even though with every word

she died, in parted piece be piece

where sadness roared upon her shore

as surf to steal such crystal sand

 

she flew feeble on broken wing,

in greater love to sing and share

in faith, to lift her beaten blossoms

to grow in fertile flower stretch of peace

toward light of shimmered sun

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  • penman gold member
    May 23, 2007

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    Wonderful

    This was a great write on the rose the grew from concrete. Wonderful creation. Good luck in the contest.


  • hungermuncher
    May 17, 2007
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    this is really good best of luck in my contest j


  • kaibab silver member
    May 14, 2007
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    Beautiful...