They call her the ketamine kid
Or sprinkle.
Ketamine kid because she’s always on it
Sprinkle ‘cause she pours pills into her mouth
Just like candy
She walks with her fingers curled
Around the waistband of her mini skirt
And her hazel eyes staring straight up
Because her head is in the clouds.
She is oblivious to the surrounding scene
Plaited hair with ribbons flows
In blonde, baby pink and blue
All held in place with butterfly clips.
Her little toes can be seen
From her open toed shoes
Blue chipped nail varnish
Suits her perfectly.
Hung loosely from her sholders
A Barbie bag, ironic much?
And in her hand she holds
A bottle of cherry coke
Just waiting to be poured
Into her fixed pouted lips.
Her tiny little summer top
Shows off her flat concaved stomach
Those falling off her face sunglasses
Finnish off her beautiful look.
Author notes
Erm..
That's me =]
Hope you like x
A contest entry
- What's in a name? by whispernthedark.
625 points, ended June 6, 2007, 29 entries
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Nicely written. Thank you so much for entering the contest, good luck.
whisper
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Finnish... sorry didn't mean for it to be plural =)
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you have some misspelled words in this.. it reads good, but i guess it just seems like you are describing yourself rather than your name.. i'm not affiliated with the contest but i'm sure i read that this was suppose to be about the name... weird.. but good luck to you anyways
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Could you please point out the misspelled words so I can correct them?
Thank you for your comment, it means such alot =]
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LOL, the only thing you seemed to have forgotten was the color of your glazed over (mayhaps vacant staring)eyes.
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i know your not an airhead if you write like this.....but.....yea...well i guess we all juss wanna be beautiful....your welcome
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wow this is awesome........she sounds like an airhead...no offense.......i love the poem tho
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Lol, thank you!
I'm not an airhead though =] I just look like one I guess. But thank you for your honest opinion.
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What a wonderful description of yourself. I feel your confidence! Keep it, it will serve you well! Thanks for this entry and good luck.
Jeannie
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bravo
A wonderfully done description! Excellent and quite superb! I loved it! LOved it! bravo...bravo...bravo...
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i really like this poem your so good at your poetry! it unbelievable... i read all your poems but i just didn't know what to say on all of then their sooooooo good so this is kinda the comment for all... do you have yahoo?
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Thank you so much!! That means such a lot =]
I'm sorry! I don't have yahoo. Only msn =[
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