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Did you ever love me?

Did you ever love me?
With all the things you say
If I asked you
what would you say today?
Did you ever love me?
with all the things you do
would you ever hit me
or turn my heart blue?
Did you ever love me?
would you ever lie
make a mistake
then hang me out to dry?
Did you ever love me
did you ever care
did you ever think about me
when i wasn't there?
Did you ever love me?
how do i know
would you ever hurt me
kick me in the snow?
Did you ever love me?

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  • Dougle
    May 14, 2007

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    i like the whole idea of asking if they ever loved you..... this was a very good poem keep up the good work i look forward to reading more poems


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 14, 2007

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    this is an honest write a question i have found myself asking from time to time, keep it flowing my friend


  • DrownInImperfection
    May 14, 2007
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    i honestly think it was a good write. keep up the good work.

  • SecretMe15
    May 14, 2007

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    This was retarded. It repeated itself way too much and what's up with all the gay questions? sorry, but i had to be honest just incase noone else will.