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What is this Part Three

I finally met someone
who will help me
get away from you
while im still alive.

I finally met someone
who wont turn my face blue
even though
I mess up too

I finally found someone
who will treat me good
just the way
a real man should

I asked him
to help me
get away from you

I finally found
someone to love
who loves me back
and I know
I WILL NEVER GET SLAPPED AGAIN!!!

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    May 14, 2007

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    BRAVO!!!!!
    this is good, i have read the other too and this is something that makes me smile as i read it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest