Gluttony my friend
Lust my hope
Greed my calling
Sloth my life
Wrath my lover
Envy my help
Pride my end
A contest entry
- Seven Lines by Lj-.
300 points, ended May 27, 2007, 26 entries
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Comments
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This is a very mature piece in its thinking... Well wrought and executed... Well done! Mike

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I like your use of the seven deadly sins, very creative.
Thank you for your entry,
Good luck!


