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Ode to the Forest

Shadows and secrets
concealed within the ancient
woods of yesterday.

O lusty red and
vibrant gold, green, white; here the
living palette sleeps.

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It's 5 am, and it pops into my head. Oh the pecularities of a poet!

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  • iced-rose
    June 1, 2007

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    if thy is concealed with the ancient wood of yesterday
    how shall thy breathe

    Wthout coming to life, surelt thy will suffocate
    Beneath the blooms of tommorrow


  • Olivias Violin
    May 14, 2007
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    very good