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Delta Blues

In this game of hide and seek,
Can you find what the blind man's found?
Even though it's tongue and cheek,
Can you find harmony in a deaf man's sound?
There's a pretty girl sitting outside.
She's swinging on a swing all by herself.
Tell me, can you pick her up when she falls down?

Author notes

Lately I've found that happiness really is a perception that you have. And if you want to be able to help people or just make yourself feel better about things, then you really have to have a deeper understanding about certain things that goes beyond common knowledge.

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  • Lj-
    May 23, 2007

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    This is really good. I like the questions asked and author notes, cool thoughts.

    My favorite line:
    "Can you find harmony in a deaf man's sound?"


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