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Ebony, iv'ry
Sit beneath my fingertips,
Sweetly, music flows.

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  • mmm didnt ummmm thingy not john lennon the other guy sing this? anyway me likey this poem alot


  • DrunkenRam
    December 27, 2007
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    This is not juvenile, I have twin Daughters that play.


  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Ebony, iv'ry
    Sit beneath my fingertips,
    Sweetly, music flows.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. This write has really tickled my musical side.


  • macandrew
    May 17, 2007

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    A bit lost in the use of song lyrics but a sweet image/sound.

    John


  • silverscent gold member
    May 14, 2007
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    Aww the wonderful duet of ebony and ivory. A lovely haiku here. A very simple yet beautiful write.

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