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Kiwi

Darker shades of green
Emanating from within.
Refreshed, exotic.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Darker shades of green
    Emanating from within.
    Refreshed, exotic.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. You have dome a very good job of describing the kiwi fruit.


  • sheltered
    December 12, 2007
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    This is one of my favorites so far.
    Love the imagery.


  • Swan song gold member
    June 4, 2007
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    A very nice little haiku. Well formed and thought out.
    I like it.

  • Deepredvelvet
    May 20, 2007
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    Makes me like kiwi's even more


  • xXxWorthlessxXx
    May 18, 2007
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    i love kiwi. this made my mouth water. thanks so much for entering


  • macandrew
    May 17, 2007

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    Allergic.

    They use to taste so good.
    Well penned.
    John

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