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(She's The Perfect) ♥Pin-Up Girl For Botox♥

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She's straight glamour baby,

    perfect&&plastic.

  She's what you wish you were;

            Just fucking fantastic.

 

She's the Implant Queen;

    silicone tits, collagen hits

            && trashy magazines...

 

  Yeah she's got diamonds in her eyes,

       && it's no fucking surprise

    she's the envy of popstars everywhere;

               you better learn to stop&&stare.

 

 She's better than God

    'cuz she's got style,

         with sex for legs

   & a 10,000 watt smile

 

     yeah baby!

 

She's the Implant Queen;

    silicone tits, collagen hits

            && trashy magazines...

 

    She's the new jesus

  dressed in Gucci and Chanel,

      stick thin && perfect

  ((yeah she's the mother fuckin' belle))

 

She's the

       she's the

              she's the .Im.plant.Queen.

     silicone tits (she's perfect)

   collagen hits (she's glam)

&& trashy magazines (she's hollywood)

Author notes

I ♥♥♥ Jeffree Star.
It's not really all that good, but it's based on some of his songs ^_^
It's supposed to be sung with a similar feel too.
Whoo for electro-pop.

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  • Creatress silver member
    June 5, 2007

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    Unfortunately I don't know who Jeffree Star is but I tell you, I don't have to..to be able to appreciate this piece! I just fucking loved this. My all time favorite part was:
    She's better than God

    'cuz she's got style,

    with sex for legs

    & a 10,000 watt smile
    wow. You tell it girl! I loved the tone of this piece. The rhyming was well executed. Fabulous (as always).

    Creatress


    • Exodus gold member
      June 5, 2007
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      Haha Thanks doll.
      The picture is one of Jeffree Star. One of my other pieces has a picture of him if you wanted to take a look; http://allpoetry.com/poem/2959638
      He's also a singer/makeup artists. If you have myspace you can find his myspace, and music, on there.
      Thank you as always for a wonderfully encouraging comment love.
      ♥

  • pozo
    May 29, 2007

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    Good piece, I liked the bittersweet description of plastic surgery here.
    Pozo


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    May 27, 2007

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    Interesting piece here and quite a picture
    you found for this one! I love your style
    of writing and think you did a great job here!
    Thanks for sharing it and keep it up!
    I look forward to reading more from you!



    Jeremy0826

  • Hello Kitty
    May 24, 2007
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    Well that was something new and interesting to read. lol. But very true and real!!! to write about


  • erininthesky
    May 24, 2007
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    Wow.. I really love your style in this poem. And the image that goes along with it, too. Great job!


  • NicotineHeartbreak
    May 23, 2007

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    Wow babydoll, this is a-m-a-z-i-n-g! I mean, not amazing, amazingly fuking fantastic!
    This is the REAL dirty pretty, not the regurgitated stuff made unique by the full stops and commas. This is the beautiful tragedy wrapped in haunted dreams. This is great.

    Keep it up sweetie!

    Luff ya

    x x x

    • Exodus gold member
      May 23, 2007
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      Wow dollface thank you so much, that means a lot ^_^
      You've gotta love Jeffree Star. XD
      Love you too,
      Hope you're doin' ok
      ♥♥♥


  • forbidden-colour
    May 19, 2007

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    "She's the Implant Queen;
    silicone tits, collagen hits
    && trashy magazines.."

    All Of This Just Fits Together Perfectly, And..


    Jeffree Star Is Gorgeous,


    Mwah
    x


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    May 16, 2007

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    WONDERFUL

    I LOVE THIS. STUNNING. BRILLIANT WRITING AND WRITTEN VERY CLEVERLY INDEED. WONDERFUL IMAGERY HERE AS WELL. THE FLOW WAS AMAZING. KEEP WRITING.

    WAYNE


    • Exodus gold member
      May 16, 2007
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      Thank you very much for all your comments on my poetry, they're greatly appreciated.


  • Madame Feu- Cheveux
    May 16, 2007

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    Wow, I have been away for months, and you have changes your style, rhyming wit yor rhythem, it's beautifl in a whole new way, I am gonna comment on all your newies, I have missed poerty, as school gets tiring, and life gets monotonous... even when you aren't on the brink of insanity, I wold love to get in touch, I miss you.

    As for your poem, it is amazing, it's beat is unearthly brilliant,

    Yeah she's got diamonds in her eyes,

    && it's no fucking surprise

    she's the envy of popstars everywhere;

    you better learn to stop&&stare.


    Stuff like that honey, thats gold. It's better than gold, it's fucking holy.

    Your brillaint.


  • requiempoet gold member
    May 15, 2007

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I fucking love you you're amazing!!! you're a great poster child for DP!!!
    Rosita


  • Ignis Corpus
    May 14, 2007

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    wow thats pretty awesome, i liked how you described what alot of girls would like to have, but i dont, im just fine with me..


  • Atrophya
    May 14, 2007
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    This was a beautiful write!! How very true it is!! lol. This poem rocks! I ♥ it!!

  • Son of Jim
    May 14, 2007
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    There is definitely a rhythm and beat to it with or without music. It says alot about today, todays woman, and how society needs to portray them, and really how even though alot of times this type of being disgusts us, we can't help but feel envious. don't know Jeffree Star, but from this I can surmise the type of music he writes. This was an enjoyable read, thanks for sharing.
    Jim

    • Exodus gold member
      May 14, 2007
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      I was surprised you liked this at all to be honest Jim. I didn't think it was really your kind of song/poem/thingy.
      But I know what you mean. As much as we look down on plastic surgery as a social whole, parents are buying their daughters breast implants in stead of cars now days. Really doesn't say much about out idea of beauty does it?

      • Son of Jim
        May 15, 2007

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        Helen,
        there is a world of difference between liking something and acknowledging it's quality, in fact, I usually don't even read lyrics. So first, I did like, but second and most important, I acknowledge the quality of the writer.
        Jim


        • Exodus gold member
          May 15, 2007
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          Thank you so much Jim, that was a wonderful thing to say

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