Contradicting statements
He did this, she said that
What an endless line of
shit. Shit. SHIT!
I care about him, but it isnt ok
So lets get together and
and say whats not true
lie. Lie. LIE!
Im sick of this shit,
Im a big girl now
Let me make my own choices
im a big. Big. GIRL
Author notes
Sorry, drank toooo much. Malibu coconut rum? yeah its a promblem solver..temorary
Please tell me what you think
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Lmao I know what that stuff is like I have distributed that stuff from my former work palce. any ways excellent job with this poem depsite ya being in a state of drunkenness. I liked what you were trying to say here tellin them to back off or else basically so you made a good point. nice work and keep it up
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Im sick of this shit,
Im a big girl now
Let me make my own choices
sort of reminds me of a time when people were trying to run my life for me. I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to say in this poem, but that's what I got from it. great job as usual! keep writing!
-Jessica
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yeah my brother doesnt approve of my new boyfriend...so hes deciding to lie and say all these horrible things my boyfriend "did" (didnt) do..lol, thanks for the comment though, i didnt think people still read my poems...
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my friends didn't approve of my boyfriend and basically tried to break us up. didn't work though. don't let anyone try to run your life.
and I love your poetry...I read it still. keep writing! =]
-Jessica
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