Dear,
Object of my affection
I write this letter
as a token of my deepest love
Your golden blonde hair
obstructed
by the window pane
that keeps us apart
Your sapphire eyes
reflected
dimly in the camera lens
that captures you
Your intimate secrets
my obsession
Your deepest desires
my purpose to fulfill
My love runs true
I need to be near you
If you knew the love I held
I know you could love me too
A contest entry
- Love Letters From A Stalker by The Cube.
900 points, ended May 17, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Stalker by second-born.
500 points, ended January 13, 2008, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for sharing this concise yet effective poem...you certainly show the inner thoughts of a stalker...
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Great job!
This is a good write. Very creative, understanding and beautifully written. Very nice job! I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Keep writing and God Bless
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Good write.
My love runs true
I need to be near you
If you knew the love I held
I know you could love me too
Good stanza especially if you keep in mind that this is from a stalker. Great work and good luck to you.
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