Amid the graceful willow trees,
With flowers dancing 'round,
Among serenades of birdsong,
And summer sun abound,
There came into the world pure,
A little life renowned
This child grew as seasons changed,
Tripping through the days,
Learning, loving, changing fast,
And resting in sun's rays,
Always caring, sweet and gentle,
Innocence in every gaze
Wandering through enchanted worlds,
'Till dusk rises to the sky,
Stars twinkling and keeping watch,
The moon aglow nearby,
The child drifts to dreamland's gate,
Softly closing precious eyes
A contest entry
- My First Born (Contest) by spamwitch.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I'm going to have a baby!!!! Nov. 14th is the Due Date!!!! by Angelwatchingme.
525 points, ended September 5, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wonderful, what a joy to read. I am glad you chose to submit this. Good luck in the contest.
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Aiden was born finally, go to my page to see a pic, or go to http://www.myspace.com/spamwitch1 to see tons of pics.
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This was such an awesome poem... truelly magnificiant, it is just so awesome its one i could read over and over again! beautiful and can't wait to continue reading! ttfn you just signed in on yahoo lol hehehehe
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Warm and Fuzzy
I really got a great feeling reading this poem. Exactly what I picture hanging on the wall. Very easy to read and a positive message. Well done, thank you!
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