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Up in the Sky (Limmerick)

What is that up in the sky?
Which of the things that can fly?
AHA! It is a bird I see,
He is directly over me.
Oh no! He pooped in my eye!

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  • idkk
    August 13, 2007
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    Very interesting. It was funny too!

    xKyliex


  • Florida Sunshine
    May 15, 2007

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    Oh, Gawd

    I've been there.... at busch gardens .... I hate that when it happens... and somehow it always seems to happen!!! Funny poem!


  • slipperssun gold member
    May 14, 2007

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    great write sis... just laughing at the thought of the poop in the eye... lucky your head was not back anymore or it would have been your mouth... well done
    cheers
    jen


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    May 14, 2007

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    Great shot little bird bwahahahaha
    Need a tissue there cuz?


  • The Poetic Angel
    May 14, 2007

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    lol sis this is funny but they do say bird poop is lucky if it land on you and i agree wif Lady A the bird need a bird litter tray to use b4 he flys xxxxx minxie

    • Lady-Pegasus
      May 16, 2007
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      well if that is what it takes to get Murphy's Laws to go away... *grits teeth and runs under our tree where there are TONS of birds*


  • Lady Altheia
    May 13, 2007

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    It is a bird! It is a plane! It's superman! Just kidding, poor you. Should tell that bird to go before he leaves the house.

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