I sit on top of the world,
Gazing out to the horizon.
For the first time in months,
I am at peace.
The gentle breeze
seems to blow away the hurt,
The shining sun
melts the ice from my heart.
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I'm getting there...slowly but surely!!
Please tell me what you think
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mist
i am happy every time i read your poem.
you have a weak soft heart and yet you gather your courage and ambition for every one. its quite beautiful actually.
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thanks for the comments...means alot!! kxox
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To come out into the light, out of that darkness, of that experience or relationship,sitting looking at the horizon,one comes out into warmth and healing....Well written
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Stay there in the sun.
And young lady, if you stay in the sunshine and away from the dark the warmth will make the hurt less intense. I have many words of help on my author's page .
bazza
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i love the total peace in this poem
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