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kendal






i'd just



met U






read
your
thoughts










you
said
i
made
U
cry
















and
i
am
sorry







for
that
















it
was
your
words


















&
the
realities
of
your
life















i
loved
&
knew












if
only
for
a
















short while.
























that
made
me
want










to
be
a
better
writer.




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  • DarkEmptySoul13
    June 27, 2007

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    sad

    this brought a tear to my eye too waw.. seriously.. it touched my heart... keep writing this poem is different from others..


  • LaVieBohemme
    June 16, 2007

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    you alreaddy are a great riter, Bri..... I love you so much, dear brother.....7
    ~Jenn


  • bananasfoster42
    May 14, 2007
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    awesome. really great.


  • cheaphotelsign
    May 13, 2007

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    wow. this brought a tear to my eye. this is breathtaking. i think it is so important to tell people when they touch our lives. well done, indeed!

  • Gogetalife
    May 13, 2007
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    Wonderful my friend, glad to see u here my dear


  • slipperssun gold member
    May 13, 2007

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    a beautiful tribute to a wonderful writer... its good to see your still writing here today... take care honey
    regards
    Jen

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