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You don't understand these feelings
That I have kept inside
It is all the affection
That I feel I must hide

Its the truth about my heart
its the warmth of your eyes
its the beauty of your smile
its the pain of every goodbye

Its the caress of every kiss
Devine pleasure from the pain
My heart runs in circles
breakin underneath the strain

You can't see it
I'll hide it beneath this grin
I will hope of what could be
and dream of what could have been

Ok. Tell me honestly.

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  • Infinite Solitude
    July 7, 2007
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    Yeah... great poem...


  • Ntagatf
    May 14, 2007
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    i love this!!! is it about whats his face? the one you keep tellin me about? well anyway you gotta tell him how you feel! you never know hey he may like you just as much, but you gotta say something!!! love you hun, ttyl love ya and great description and awesome write! keep up the good work!

    tearstaindangel


  • the-gifted
    May 13, 2007
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    awww that is a great poem but it is kinda sad.