She races for the door
tries to get away, away
You hit her once again brought her to the ground
She cries, cries to you.
You pull her hair so she stands up and throw her on the bed.
She screams, screams at you.
You tell her "SHUT UP BITCH JUST TAKE IT"
and she cries.
You hit her again
and she cries
She never wanted you. You always wanted her.
You slide inside of her and pound deep.
She screams in silence
your knife gleaming against her neck.
and it drips
drips with blood.
You pound into her
hard
hard
and you just can't get enough
You hit her around
you like to see her hurt.
She just goes limp.
You continue to push her.
she's all you ever wanted
you're what she always feared.
And in the darkness....
she still thinks about it, about you
and
[[CRIES]]
it keeps replaying in her mind and
she cries
and cries
it never ends.
A contest entry
- Lots of points by illegalfairy.
1323 points, ended May 22, 2007, 33 entries
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so sad, did he really hurt you like this?
thanks for entering and good luck
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Ah that is a sad write. Why would someone do that is beyond me.
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this makes me want to kill someone. really dont see how someone can do that to another person. good poem, even if i hate the subject.
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horrible (in a very good way)
Wow this was horrible. Not the poem the poem was awesome. but what the poem's about. This was really really good. I love how you have it written.
she's all you ever wanted
you're what she always feared
This was my favorite part. I just love how you describe both what he wants and how she doesn't want it. This was really good thank you for entering it into the contest. -
that is so sad! but overall its good. i like the system you used and the ways you make the words click
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