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Profile 5 I admit

month sigh
is not how often I came back
from maybe quit
so is this thistle
to his who asked
and those he sees I lied to
my inspiration grows like a weed

what please after April whiff before it's gone
is listened to tell me everybody why I'm hyper
in marriage that has computer populace
when I don't lace up
whoa health had me with
algorithms not just analogy even
not quite with kids but oops I'm irresponsible
she says me too, slip as on wax in ears
slowly recover, example
her headache is gone, that mouth is
wait a sec I've gotta finish my poem our minutes
but she turns to grand discoveries of steering, his reset
bank papers has a place
while I am redoing yard
and amazed not so sick
but that's on cheer of sharing
ding dong keyboard
and the playfulness brings up simultaneous longing
of second child I'm stuck
management gems still come up on such ground
but not with brightness as supposed to
could be pressed as not just posed
oh so where's opposed by ops
dot the look with oh am I going to drift off
to my own thoughts or no this is important

to be around auricle
article that doesn't breaks rules
in disqualified tried
but waif wafts
from now needing what my dad didn't give
generate judgement is not my want


I experiment with tomatoes cabbage sauerkraut
while I don't have the nerve to even get to natuopath
again my breath of patience
but I have seen Asia has incoporated
my mango revised freshness from recipe
so I step to bowl of knowledge
and the rim of comparison
of math discoveries in two lands,
come over for what I can graph with kiwi
oh ostrich scratch of mine
push open a window not needing to look for wing

I can see yeeha for a canyon
with music by screen of nature
silouetting trees and hills, my teeth show
with happiness not of dentistry
and I'm ready to soprano at the bottom of the steps
where an open door is just for that exploration
frolic because they are Boulder not hiding
and I am not totally by typing

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  • detectivediana
    May 23, 2007

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    i hope you'll return soon

    i wonder if you still think of quitting allpoetry. even if you're not considering this, i wonder why you did so in the first place. i know of some reasons (being ignored, people saying "i don't understand," and your husband's disapproval...), but do you yourself want to stay? do you feel welcomed here? i hope so, although i can understand why you might not.

    the last line makes me think you feel that your writing is lacklustre, or at least, does not make you feel like you completely express what you want to say. it is hard, to translate feelings and partial thoughts int words, and it's hard for me to watch such a great writer feel like she is lacking in so many ways in this area.