It's just at night that I can hear you,
When darkness has covered the once bright sky,
Black surroundings creeping over me,
An operating silhouette show.
Amongst my dreams,
Awakening on some random hour,
I hear words,
Feel your presence,
Surrounding me,
Closing in on me;
Unthreatening, but chilling,
Happening when I least expect it.
Somehow,
It's comforting,
I feel calm,
Almost uneffected.
Are you just my imagination?
A whisper between breaks in dreams,
Or something more,
A presence,
A connection,
Reaching out slowly...
But there's one certainty,
One truth...
I can hear you...
Author notes
I chose Option 4: Titles - I CAN HEAR YOU
My Screen name: Cumin
Family Member: Angel (I think that would be pretty cool .)
A contest entry
- All In The Family by Dead Hair.
650 points, ended June 19, 2007, 39 entries
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*Shakes hands wildly* (lol, I do that when I'm excited.)
I loved it! I went to check out your profile and found out that you are VERY similar to me, I even liked most of the bands you listed.
This poem is excellence. Pure excellence.
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