STOP!
Everyone sit!
Now, can't we all stop acting like kids?
You there!
You little shit,
Its all about you isn't it?
I have been here for you since we first met, but
when I finally have a problem it's time to quit?
Friends show their true colors, when
They make you choose between them or another, and
Make you decide which is better, oh
How I love the true colors of friends
And you!
You little bitch!
When are you going to come out of your snake skin?
I tell you how I feel, and
you give sweet remarks, but
When it comes to telling me where we stand
You just run and hide from the questions needing answers.
Girls will be girls with their minds games and such, but
This isn't high school any more so when will you grow up, and
When will you talk to me as if we are still friends, Oh
How I love girls that play little girl games.
Now everyone pay attention, because
this is the last time I will say it.
I am not here to take your shit, and
I am not here to be taken advantage of.
I am here to be your friend, or
Your brother, maybe
Even your lover, but
I am not here to babysit, so
Next time you feel like being a kid I want you to just stop, and
Think about what it is you want, and
Then, Maybe
Then can we start acting like we are adults again.
Author notes
Well, its exactly how it sounds, haha. I just wrote it on the spot. Thanks to DwellingInDarkness for helping me clear my head. I hope all those that need to read it read it and learn something about themselves that need to be learned. Tell me what you think, BE CRITICAL!
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Hm. First of all, this was really good, i liked the venting, and putting it all into a poem for every one, secondly, no one will ever grow up, because if people would just stop being to immature, the world would be too perfect! ! thanks for entering my contest! Good luck!
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Wow, I feel you here, it sucks to be used, but what can we do right?
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First thought - - - MMM CAFFENINE!
Critical hey... hmm, I like it, there are parts where it does seem more like a rant than a poem, but I feel they are more times the better of angry poems. The flow cuts in and out but it was an effective and brillant poem.
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Thank you. I was trying to go for something a little edgy and different from stuff I write so I like this, it may be a little to truthful if the people it was meant for read it and they might hate me but if thats the chance I have to take to get my point across then so be it. But I doubt they even pay attention so, haha. Thanks for being there for me BTW, you are awesome and I am glad I met you. <3!
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Awww...
That's so cute.
But met, kind of lol
But yeah some people just don't care about anything but themselves...
to these people I say
"I could fucking care less"
lol, but that wouldnt be right, cause thats what inspires writes lol.
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