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abstract love

I lay my head gently to rest upon my pillow,
with only faint whispers of the night.
Gazing at the moon with the stars twinkling in my eye,
the moon glorious and bright.
The gentle sound of my failure in the night,
and only the sound of my beating heart.
Blinded by the darkness painting my milk white skin,
bleeding with the emptiness of loves depart.
Deafening ignorance,
of a dark sky.Muted thoughts,
passing grace by.
Stars twinkling in the sky  of temptation,
breaking way to virtuous immobility.
Parched mouths of succulent subtlety,
weakened eyes of burning civility.
Earth hair dusted upon my white pillow,
pink creased lips pause passive dashes.
Welcoming eyes of brown oasis,
black holes of intimate flashes.
Abstract imitated sexuality,
molded loves temptation.
Silent kisses of pervicacious persuasion,
uncirculated sincerity of acceleration.

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  • Malabu
    June 11, 2007
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    Thank you very much for entering this contest
    Mal


  • Cavca
    May 21, 2007
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    Very visual. Nice alliteration and imagery. Good luck.