You hate him.
He hates you.
I'm in the middle.
Torn between you.
You make me let you go,
Proud in your stubborness
and you can't see
How you've killed me.
Everyday,
I try and try,
Please, can't you see me?
Can't you see how I need you?
I tell you,
and You're deaf.
"Give him up," you say.
"He's like cocaine.
You only think you need him.
And he's just controlling you."
You were here once,
Don't you remember?
When you were addicted?
And you still needed me?
I was here, wasn't I?
I held you when you thought you couldn't take it.
I told you it was alright.
Why must you be a hypocrit?
Why can't you hold me now?
Why won't you stand here with me,
Help me keep a hold of myself.
I need him,
but I need you.
For god's sake,
can't you see me?
can't you see me anymore?
Author notes
option #3
this one is written through megan's eyes. I know you're reading this meg and I don't want to hear it. I know I'm a hypocrit, but I'm standing my ground. If you won't listen to me, I can't exactly catch you. You made your choice. I'm just waiting for you to see the foolishness of it.
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i still dnt see why you think im a foolish choise, but what ever.
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hmmm.. I love this, the emotion in it is desperate and the relating to it is easy for many in so many different ways, my fellow colleague judge and I had different interpretations of this and both happy with it! Thanks for entering!
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I really enjoyed this. Found it to be real, honest, intense and full of love and affection for a dread friend. Excellent job of viewing a situation from anothers eyes! Thanks for the entry and best of luck!
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very exceptional
oh damn it all, i love you storm. your still my bestfriend. i hear you. i believe you believe what your saying, but i just, can't see it. somedays i think i see it. but i just, cant loose you both.
i do love you though. il always need you. please forgive me. i know your not a hypocrit, your just you. you feel how you feel. and you write stunningly. you still make me cry. this especially.
i appriciate it that you can see it from my point of vew, or at least pretend to. i know youre trying.
and i still mis you
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