Greater than the ocean,
and as mighty as the sea.
You will find our love.
Always there like the mightiest oak tree.
And light as a angels feather.
You will find our love.
Even with the greatest storms,
and even violent seas.
You will find our love.
With the calm breeze,
and the bright summer sun.
You will find our love .
As gentle as butterfly,
and soft as a baby's skin.
You will find our love.
For everything you can imagine,
and anything you can't
You will always find our love!
A contest entry
- Love Is.... by incondite.
440 points, ended July 1, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Fall In Love by piccola.
1000 points, ended October 14, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Fall in Love... by trista.
450 points, ended October 20, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I thought this was really very sweet, and hopefully it was written with someone special in mind.
There are a couple of grammar issues that interupted the flow a bit, and it is a weeeeee bit cliche, but I also see you are fairly young and I think your poetry will only grow as you do. The thoughts are clear and easy to understand and relate to and I enjoyed reading this. Thanks so much for your entry and good luck in the contest.
~J.
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well expressed it touched my heart, bravo
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