originally when I came here, I found something off curezone that zapped my happiness over my mind wandering in somersaults not sentences, when it's a symptom among other things of as I've phrased for myself before, MeOrMercury :
Wondrous at whether I'm wired by Wernicke's aphasia or myself. For the umpteenth time like in a development of me, I want a tempo word that pleases so temporarily but then the prolific flair could just be that brain lock vented.
but intrigues ties are there yet like swing on tree :
A swoosh of static is rampant as a flight takes off by my reaching ear, for the sensation to turn the station, this isn't a grasshopper to be caught, almost by an addiction for compensation. I don't have any cable constructed through any thumb-index finger grab generally but pointing with a pint of expecting an idyllic mutual groveling on the gravel gaveling grindings and discoveries. A swan needn't be seen for me to squirm to the lovely limitations of what is continual in increments or muster -- I recuperate in the sand where simpler things do occur as I rise enjoying this look of pantyhose on my legs... verbose I become yet while simplifying to be simple girl with my centimeters in the city!
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just attaching batches to author's page... which wasn't even for chapter
so not wanting the words I usually look for
No comment expected!
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i hope you've changed your mind for not wanting the words; but if want me to delete this, you're welcome to request it.
i wonder what it is on curezone that zaps your happiness; could it be the lack of replies? from my brief intervals there, it also zapped my happiness in that it felt unreceptive. i didn't feel welcome, despite eyeing your poetry. it felt like it could be a good hiding place, but it was an unpleasant feeling.
i recall someone commenting on one of your contests, remarking that "This sounds like Wernicke's aphasia to me...," and i imagined that you felt hurt by it. i'm not sure if you do suffer from this (but i don't think you do), as i never thought of it until i read that comment. i think you simply choose not to use syntax as one is taught to use, and that you don't like to be literal (at least when not writing). you have shown evidence of being able to write fluently, and although it might be in the minority of what you write, you still do write it. regardless of those who choose to belittle your creative efforts (and your efforts, i find, are admirable and very determiend), there will always be some people who find great body, volume, and depth in it... like me! your fanclub might be small in comparison to those who write things like, "your touch makes me touch the sky / your eyes make me feel like a flower ...," but your poetry, i find, is different and is refreshing in that way. if it's of any consolation to you, you're my favourite poet by far -- and i've read a lot of poetry throughout my life (and have taken a poetry course as well!).
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