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Sealed

Two shall become one
the mother of your children
I'm yours forever































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  • Samplette gold member
    May 19, 2007

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    I like where you took this title. Short but full of emotion. Very nicely done. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam

  • hose30
    May 15, 2007

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    deep

    deep wording.I know in the bible it say that man and women should become one flesh. Interesting and the mother of your children.I'm yours forever.Wow those are powerful words. You are giving your all to this person and it is truly from your heart, body and soul.I think you can get a lot from this piece it is truly deep. great write and very expressive piece.Where are you getting you inspirations? This piece is wonderful.