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[ seven cursed times i wept alone ]

seven cursed times i wept alone
as my weak voice faded slowly
a muted bird i became now
seven winters i waited
to hear your voice
I'm tired of this
take my life.

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  • Lj-
    May 22, 2007
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    Very sad, the feeling of waiting.


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