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Just A Toy

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Am I just a toy some thing you play with then put away?
All the time we spent together you throw it all away.
The new toy is so much better so just go on and leave.
Leave me be to sit and here and rot away.
Maybe it would have been better if you had never got me.

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  • christy22
    August 7, 2007

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    i love it you have great imagedry and i can see and feel the emotions and it is so short it is a great poet that can put so much in so little words...this is a really good poem keep it up


  • Lancea Optimus
    August 4, 2007

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    I like how you used a toy as a metaphor for a relationship gone old. Everyone is always looking for an upgrade. BTW thank you for commenting on my poem "I Live". As always I try to return the favor.


  • CherylAnn
    August 4, 2007

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    Ohhhhhhhhhh this is heartbreaking...It hurts when someone just uses you and tosses you away...Things always get better though...I speak from experience...
    Keep your chin up and be blessed...
    ~Cheryl~


  • Midnight MageMasher
    May 22, 2007

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    yeah i know the feeling when this happen it has happended to me also but dont worry things will work out some how they seem to always do.


  • useles
    May 13, 2007

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    I know how you feel i have been used many times before! It really hurts but u will find the right person out there for you

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