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I've gotten about a dozen 'I don't understand'
and does that mean no reconcilation rose...
that can be a predicament not pretty
if I leave an impediment to speech.
That's not to be hardened, just read.
Can it be pruned after it's sent as a present?

All this besides that given from my husband, which now then can't show him I can speak somewhere when I think of poetry, but I don't have a port more than the thorn of reaction to my trying to get out living with my little liver left but there's another one of focus and fix.

that was a poor week

It's or this's a pulmonary pain to know I can't talk, or work it out, and not have different as nothing so I've had an embolism from the stain of my cluttered writing before the clots on either of my legs could, book ends maybe if I know how to make a stand with everyone who can say what's right even. Struck down as by another inner stroke of who oversat to now only watch participate. Love by myself is not to form hate. They don't deserve for me to be deserved as an alteration isn't to be for an altercation. Typical to be picked tied to the community and the person.


I list again on day it's uncomfortable an easy life is by insulting

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practice delete felt when I took everything off author's page, but with the character I have, I put some parts back.

not even words really looked for here

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  • detectivediana
    May 21, 2007

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    just understand understanding

    while i agree with others that your writing (and your comments) are not the easiest to understand, i do find that you are very creative with the way you express yourself. i may not understand exactly what you're communicating, but i do take the time to extract meaning from it. it is a challenge, but it's because your writing is not immediately accessible, and i find that refreshing and welcoming. it allows me to navigate through fresh thoughts, and to experience imaginary scenes that i had never sensed before. i understand that with the constant "i don't understand" comments can be very discouraging, and i've heard it being said many times, to myself, and to others. it's one thing to not understand and to avoid because you don't understand, but it's something different when you don't understand but seek to understand.

    you make the ordinary transform into something extraordinary. i am very glad that i've stumbled upon your poetry, as it opens spectrums and there isn't much of better gift than this.

  • wolfspiritguide
    May 13, 2007
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    hug