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seven shores

Seven shores of yearning for the love of you,
leaves the ocean dehydrating, not blue.
Waves of denial flood with foaming mouths,
leaves the ocean wanting to scream and shout.

Seven shores of kindness evade me now,
I will take your love and I don’t care how.
Seven shores of yearning, tsunami hit!!!

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  • Lj-
    May 22, 2007
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    I like the whole sea compared to love concept. Creative.


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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    I like the ending. tsunami hit!!!