I can not know,
I can not describe,
The feelings in my mind.
I can not explain,
I can not tell,
Whats locked within my heart.
My heart is tortured,
My mind does not know peace.
I'm torn between two lives to live,
Torn between to souls to be,
Troubled by the dreams I can't beleive.
Is it love or is it like?
The question taunts my brain.
Is it real or is it just,
A perculiar sense of mind.
Author notes
Just came to me while walking to the beach at Norfolk
A contest entry
- Round 1 Of Many by Dark Whispers.
440 points, ended June 24, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Passionate Erotic Poems by rosepoet.
300 points, ended July 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
Many people often ponder that, it is mind wrenching. you expressed that more than clearly through you words
-
its great and i often find my self in this sort of situation, i agree with pixie with this, i can see this being a exxcellent chorus of a song, or a part of the verses, it has a great flow i love this lots and would like to try to write a song using this, if thats ok, it has a fantastic flow thoughout it me likey lots
-
thats good, i can't explain the feelings in my mind either :-) sounds a bit like a song, would be a good song.
Adding your comment:
