If I could ,I would comb the sky.
And collect the stars .
Pile them into a basket with silver light.
And I will give the basket to you .
Because all precious and beautiful things .
Should be yours today.
A contest entry
- Spiritually Uplift Me by Viyanna Rosemarie 2.
425 points, ended May 28, 2007, 16 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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I like.
Its very short and sweet yet it holds very good imagery for how llong it is. Great job!
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short, sweet, and very to the point. i thank you for this entry into my contest and for uplifting my soul. i wish you the best of luck in the judging. viyanna rosemarie
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short, sweet, and very to the point. i thank you for this entry into my contest and for uplifting my soul. i wish you the best of luck in the judging. viyanna rosemarie
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oh my!! This is absolutely beautiful, my friend. Your words are so tender and sweet and very descriptive and really touching. great job.
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