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A Poem for Moma on Mother's Day

My hero avidly awakens the morn
Fearlessly fighting darkness' scorn
Sending breakfast for the trees
Warming all its nurture sees
Disclosing the beauty of the rose
Ameliorating its trapping of the nose
Around it all planets reverently rotate
Or they die directionless in state
I am its eloquently eloquent son
I am not praising the flaming sun
Its the reason I have come
I talk of my motherly mom
All these words to secretly say
I love you Happy Mother's Day

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    August 15, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful dedication, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • dustookie2
    August 10, 2008

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    i am sure your words touch her heart as I feel the depth of love .... very heartfeltGood luck in this contest...Thank you for the smile.