My hero avidly awakens the morn
Fearlessly fighting darkness' scorn
Sending breakfast for the trees
Warming all its nurture sees
Disclosing the beauty of the rose
Ameliorating its trapping of the nose
Around it all planets reverently rotate
Or they die directionless in state
I am its eloquently eloquent son
I am not praising the flaming sun
Its the reason I have come
I talk of my motherly mom
All these words to secretly say
I love you Happy Mother's Day
A contest entry
- A Rose For You In Appreciation. by Poetryintheblood.
425 points, ended August 18, 2008, 16 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your beautiful dedication, good luck in my contest, Josie
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i am sure your words touch her heart as I feel the depth of love ....
very heartfelt
Good luck in this contest...Thank you for the smile.



