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threatening walls

'tis here
and here
and here
and here
that all the beauty grows
'neath firmament and
o'er terra firma
that bodies wander
in rag tag clothes
i look into your eyes
color unknown
but crystal sharp
and wonder is it
really here
that beauty has chosen to lie
in age and name and
life's extremes
i wander o'er the
child dreams
that brought you here
and here
and here
and yet threatens everyday
to take you away
what of it, says i
'tis an infinite sky
and infinite is possibility
endless agility
careening in and out
of sick cycles
truth lies hidden
under covers blue
and i can't do anything
to get to you
i can't be the one
to decide
what's here
is waiting
inside your mind
and im here
and here
and here
and here
but wandering
throught the night
in rag tag clothes
beneath stars
and moonlight
thinking of all the
wrong i do
whenever i sit
and think of you

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  • rjy13
    May 21, 2007

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    this is magnificent. I loved the kind of pattern it had and the repition. I really enjoyed reading it.


  • ADownes
    May 15, 2007
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    I love this! It's so familiar to me as well, maddy!
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