Dear God;
I am speaking to you this evening
on behalf of a girl from Nortern Ireland.
Her name is Stefanie, also known as Emphatic Rose.
She is very concerned about her friend Jordan.
Whom you know is a fifteen year old guy from England.
There are a few things I would like to ask you Lord.
I ask that you remove the burden of Jordan's ill health from his cup
and place it within my cup and make him whole.
I ask you this in the name of your son Jesus Christ.
Remove the burden of Jordan's ill health from his cup my God,
and place it within my cup and make him whole dear God,
in the name of your son Jesus Christ I ask you this.
In the name of your son Jesus Christ,
I ask that you remove the burden of ill health from Jordan's cup
and place it in my cup oh God, and make him whole.
May Jordan find peace in your glory dear God,
In the name of your son Jesus Christ I ask you this.
Thank you for the blessings you have given me dear God,
creator of all, in all.
Thank you for my salvation through the blood of your son Jesus Christ.
I love you God.
Thank you for the cup of Jesus.
Amen.
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A contest entry
- Please Help a Friend of Mine in Need! (Is Really Ill) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
465 points, ended May 18, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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Beautiful... Loved the rhyme of this. Just one amendmant, which is fine... I am living in England, I was just born in Northern Ireland. Thank you so much, I am sure that Jordan will be grateful for your beautiful words of encouragement. Thank you for holding onto this forever and always and putting your own needs second.
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