Warmth
Darkness
Sounds
A pulse
Ever beating
Ever Pumping
A woman's voice
A warm voice
A beautiful voice
The voice of mother
Muffled by this wall
I soon will breach
Into a world of light
A world of new experiences
Of loving, caring, and joy
The voice of father
A good strong voice
A loving, caring man
Supporting my existence
Loving his wife
Forming my existence
An example
A provider
A father
Loving
Caring
Joyous
.:: Folken Lacour de Fanel ::.
Author notes
You may frame this in your nursery, if you so desire.
Best of wishes with the new life you are bringing into this world. Best of wishes, and greatest blessings to his soul.
--Folken
A contest entry
- My First Born (Contest) by spamwitch.
450 points, ended May 17, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Aiden was born finally, go to my page to see a pic, or go to http://www.myspace.com/spamwitch1 to see tons of pics.
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Beautiful
A lovely choice of words and great flow. I often wonder especially late at night when he is the most active what it is that he could be feeling. thank you for this. -
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You are most welcome. I enjoyed writing this for you, I'm glad you liked it. I wish the best of times upon you and your family.
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This is beautiful in it's wording - especially depicting the 'voice' of the unborn child and what they might feel or hear.
good luck in your contest.
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Thanks. I hope she likes it.
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Wonderful and warm welcome into this world!!!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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