What’s the point of living if all you do is hurt,
And when you you’re worth nothing and people treat you like dirt.
All you see is sunshine but you’re not happy enough to walk,
When someone says hi you’re too sad to open your mouth and talk.
You believe in God at first then you begin to have doubts,
You wanna lay in you’re bed when you used to love to go out.
You get into things that you know that you shouldn’t do,
The darkness seems embracing and razors and talking too you.
You wanna walk along that street with a skirt up to your ass,
And try to stop every car with a man in it that goes pass.
You just wanna be loved but it never wants to love you back,
They try to convince you it’ll get better but you’re not trying to hear that.
So tell me what I should do when it comes to hard to bare,
Those thoughtful razors and stilettos are always waiting in there.
The pills and drugs are always in my hand for a price,
The bathroom always has set the scene for my suicide.
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♥I need advice or someone to help,
This poor soul who only wants to hurt herself♥
Author notes
I need some serious help with my life, to help me straighten it out.
Please tell me what you think
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I have never connected so much with a poem!I really love it!
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hey didn't comment on one of your poems in ages. this one is really great!!
You wanna walk along that street with a skirt up to your ass,
haha love that part
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im sorry you feel this way I used to I searched for love for so long but i guess in a way if ur looking for it it qwount find you... I think everyone wants to put themsleves out there and JUSt stand there with a sign Making it that obvios Im willing to give you advice if your willing to talk to me I loved the poem and I can relate much more than others no I loved how you worded it and I loved how it flowed I loved how it wasnt just put out GREAT JOB the emotinal use was incredible in here by reading this is made me think about how I gave up cutting it was hard but one day I just seemed to over come it..
-Des-
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I loved how you put your emotions and your feelings into this poem.
Be strong!You don't need alot of advice because you are your own advice!Always beleive in yourself ok?
It's good to express your feeling out in poems so that you can let it out through words of your own kind,but you don't have to punish yourself and hurt yourself in order to feel better.^^ Much love and keep writing!
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I can tell you to be strong and you don't need to cut yourself you have a lot of friends and we care about you I know sometimes the lonliness can seem too much but don't let it get you down
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Well...
I really loved all of the emotion oyu put in the poem. It was very thought provoking. But as far as me giving you advice, Im sorry, I cant help you, b/c Im going through the same thing. This poem actually helped me straighten out my thoughts a little.I wish you luck in everything that you're going through, & whatever you do, dont give up. Much love,
-Angel-
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i'm gald it helped you, i guess it kinda helped me a little i'm feeling a little better :/ i guess
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