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Self-Portrait in Bark

willingly for her in spring,
my awkward intuition tangoes lusciously
in between her
answering wood
and her
self-portrait in bark.

and where she is cut?
a fever breaks.
and where I more than cry?
sryup.

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 9, 2007
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    This was a good poem I like the wittyness of this.
    For a short one is a very good one.