Oh, my quiet infection
Of negligent elegance
Is seeping through
My borrowed clothing and gleaming outer shell
Your imaginary heart beat is giving me
migraines and inferiority complexes
All out of prescription pills
with time to kill
Self-sacrifice is not my style
You can be the Superhero of modern day media
I prefer ecstasy and mirror dreams
And motor oil and torn out seams
I'm dying like faeries with eating disorders
And supernova genocide on the pierced tongues of the under-aged
Lie to me
Tell me I've been sick forever
and this dirty-lipped
shattered mirror reflection will fade when
I get better
Exposed flesh and disgraceful memories
Are all I have left
Because, it seems,
Our realities are distorted opposites
I have learned my lesson
There is no pleading with contamination
And no amount of suicide flavored bubble gum will take the taste
of{YOU} out of my mouth
So fuck the consequences
Delicate grace is not born
It is molded and sold at any hardware store
Please, don't go out of your way
to taste the rain
[The sweet drops of agony are calling my name]
Darkness-bound and Diseased
Are the qualifications
for the melody of the late night TV
But forget all these minuscule things
Like hot liquor Sundays
and lace tattoos on bleeding thighs
This is not the time nor the place.
So paint on your smiles of mercy and fatality
We have to look good for the cameras
Of negligent elegance
Is seeping through
My borrowed clothing and gleaming outer shell
Your imaginary heart beat is giving me
migraines and inferiority complexes
All out of prescription pills
with time to kill
Self-sacrifice is not my style
You can be the Superhero of modern day media
I prefer ecstasy and mirror dreams
And motor oil and torn out seams
I'm dying like faeries with eating disorders
And supernova genocide on the pierced tongues of the under-aged
Lie to me
Tell me I've been sick forever
and this dirty-lipped
shattered mirror reflection will fade when
I get better
Exposed flesh and disgraceful memories
Are all I have left
Because, it seems,
Our realities are distorted opposites
I have learned my lesson
There is no pleading with contamination
And no amount of suicide flavored bubble gum will take the taste
of{YOU} out of my mouth
So fuck the consequences
Delicate grace is not born
It is molded and sold at any hardware store
Please, don't go out of your way
to taste the rain
[The sweet drops of agony are calling my name]
Darkness-bound and Diseased
Are the qualifications
for the melody of the late night TV
But forget all these minuscule things
Like hot liquor Sundays
and lace tattoos on bleeding thighs
This is not the time nor the place.
So paint on your smiles of mercy and fatality
We have to look good for the cameras
Author notes
Option 6
Words I used: (Not in order)
Elegance
Gleaming
heart beat
prescription pills
Infection
Mirror(x2)
Dreams
Self-(sacrifice)
Superhero
Ecstasy
Genocide
Piercing (I think pierced counts...)
Dirty/Lips (dirty-lipped)
Shattered
Reflection
Lie(s)
Distortion(Distorted)
Reality(Realities)
Flesh
Memories
Disgraceful
Pleading
Contamination
Suicide
Delicate
Grace
Rain
Drops of Agony
Mercy
Fatality
Toxic
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Comments
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The first thing I noticed (and appreciated) was how many words you used that originally came from Latin (infection, negligent, elegance, etc.)
And I love the line, "I'm dying like faeries with eating disorders"
I do think a couple lines got a little burdensome, such as, "and this dirty-lipped shattered mirror reflection..." But in general, this is a great write and I enjoyed it a lot. :-) Thank yo
