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Emptiness

Throwing away what's left inside,
Faulting yourself; Breakdown, unable to hide.
Losing in a battle against yourself.
Live or die; Hating everything else.

Fake love for a mannequin of sin,
Searching; Lost in the bottomless pit.
Wasting away; You cannot win.
Surrounded by chances; All perfect, but none fit.

No one to blame other than yourself,
Immense pain; Piercing rotten flesh.
Mistaken for something more; Known as something less.
Looking for certainty in an ocean of doubt.

Forging emotions for a vacant soul,
Hoping to once again feel; Once left behind.
Seeing past the tears; Clouded by an absent mind,
Leaving lies and deceit; In a world which blinds.

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  • Desire gold member
    May 13, 2007

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    Wow!!


    This is one Powerful piece of emotion that drips from Your quill~
    Can't help but feel the pain...the hurt~
    I imagine there are others who can relate...
    Wow!!
    This is Beautifully expressed poetically~
    Thank You for sharing this!!
    It takes Strength to do so...
    Wish You only Happiness

    Many blessings to You!
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~