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Night

Darkness, it descends,
Silence all around (strangely),
A vibrant town, calmed.

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  • Pollycheck
    December 14, 2007

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    Darkness, it descends,
    Silence all around (strangely),
    A vibrant town, calmed.

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. Very vivid description of the darkness of the night.


  • sheltered
    December 12, 2007
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    I like how you broke it up evenly with "strangely" and "calmed".


  • Swan song gold member
    May 13, 2007
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    This is very great imagry


  • And Hyetal
    May 13, 2007

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    Oooh, wow! I can acutally FEEL the darkness in this poem! I just love this line: "A vibrant town, calmed."

    Thanks again for the comment!
    Cassie


  • DogFish silver member
    May 12, 2007
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    It is a strange truth; a town, like ourselves, tires and must find that quiet moment of rest...

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