Ahhh yes, tonights my night
scaring everyone in sight
trotten the neighborhood
up to no good
Cats running for cover
a dog I'm not they'll soon discover
people see me and close their gate
little do they know I got a date
Got on my double vested pin stripe suit
black and white oxford shoes and spats ta' boot
tonights my night to howl and croon
this is my night to howl at the moon
I find a spot and give a grrrrowl
just to show my teeth and scare off the owl
Oh, yes! I am no fool
When this wolfe howls ain't nothin but kool
got the whole town scared of me
except one old owl sittin in a tree
I howl and howl into the night
until that old owl says, "that's no moon, wolf, thats only the street light".
Author notes
just a wolfe kind of guy. this for my friend rose angel
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A contest entry
- Please Help Me by bignikki88.
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Are you sure you've edited your author's notes yet?
I'm not sure if you've read the rules.
Hahaha, this was funny. The ending was awesome. You made up some good rhymes, too. But when you said,
"Got on my double vested pin stripe suit
black and white oxford shoes and spats ta' boot
tonights my night to howl and croon
this is my night to howl at the moon"
The end sounded a bit forced, you said "My night to howl" Twice I felt like you were forcing the word "moon" in because it rhymed.
Anwyay, this was a good poem, thanks for entering my contest
Good luck in my contest.
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Ha not bad for a wolf guy i like it very intertaining I love to hear the wolves howl but watch out for the wise old owl. fun aside I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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wow me liked
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Great!!
Hey this just shows how much land man has taken from the wild... makes me sad
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this is really cute. thank you for entering
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Hey
Somehow I cannot picture you up on that shovelhead in a zoot-suit Dave, but if you insist!HA-HA
John
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I can't picture me
anywhere wearing a zoot suit lol but perhaps as a wolf I might or even a wolf head, I alread have four foot rest pegs for the driver....
I mean four foot paw pegs !!!
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What a great write here hun.... made me smile and I sure as hell needed one today...... well done
Karen
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tthis is so cute and brought a smile to my face, something i really needed at the moment after reading the lasst poem of your i commented on
looks like you also cheered up your friend it was written for. be well and be blessed
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Very cute. I really enjoyed reading this. It'd make a great children's poem. This is so creative and well worth the time to read. I give it a 7 out of 10
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a welcome read from the norm my friend, and for Rosemary too, know she likes this. very witty ending that will bring many a smile, job well done.
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lol...i had to read this twice to quite grasp it, and it'a amazing and funny. Great write...my favorite part was:
""got the whole town scared of me
except one old owl sittin in a tree
I howl and howl into the night
until that old owl says, "that's no moon, wolf, thats only the street light""
it made me laugh out loud, littrally.
lol
great write.
thanks for sharing!
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Lol, I read her poem first then had to come and read yours ...Omg, both of you so hilarious! Rose was in desperate need of some cheering up, especially lately! Thank you for putting a smile on my dear friends heart! ~Sie
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I love it. Very cool play on words
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A Humourous Date!!!!!
Should I be the first to say it is so cutely written and a "Hoot" of a laugh! Can just see you walkin in that pin stripe suit, like going out on a special date, and all the dogs howling, the cats' serenading! AHOOO!MEOW..OOOOO,,All the lights coming on in the houses..A man coming out with his shotgun..wondering what is going on!!! I notice you haven't picked your date up yet..To much of natures' interference I guess...You are a riot!!! You crack me up!!! The cutest poem yet....This Kool lady thinks your gift is humour! And also being a good friend...Boy would I like to see you in pinstripe and spats,,,and a video of the neighborhood...and you howling at the moon!!!!
Roaddog...You're the best for humour! I just love it! And I will take the dedication....Proud of your poem, and the dedication! You are something else! Bravo, dear friend...I will regret that I ever envisioned you howling at the moon! And thanks friend, for a friendly lovely humourous poem, for a friend!!!!! Write more like this!!!We need the humour!
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