You need me.
You love me.
The way I make you feel,
the way I make you live again.
I'm your power,
and your downfall.
You know you're going to die,
and you know that it's going to be
all
my
fault.
If it's my fault, it's yours.
Don't you just want to float away?
I can help you escape.
I'll warn you though,
I'm going to make you work.
No matter what they ask
of you
I'm there behind you,
making sure that you
can't say no.
They'll push you down,
using you,
using you in ways that even you can't like.
You're trash,
and that's why you're here
in the first place.
It's so simple though,
isn't it?
It's what you've been doing your whole life anyway.
No pleasure without sacrifice.
No glory without shame.
No you without me.
There will always be a me without you.
You're just a game to me,
just a toy.
Don't think I'll miss you when you're
gone.
They look at you and they smile,
they haven't got a clue,
once they know,
you're done for.
They won't love you anymore.
Love is for the pure.
Love is for those who try.
Love is for those who don't escape,
those who don't go
shoving a needle in their body
everytime they fall.
I love you.
You love me.
We'll always have each other.
Please tell me what you think
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THis is awesome. Your imagery is flawless. Ilike the way that you did this. You wrote from the drugs point of view. Outstanding!!!!! Brillant!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks for the read and keep on writing
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its beautiful ....full of hardship and pain ur an idol ....thank u 4 letting me be a part of ur mind and world....BreeBabes07
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You're trash,
and that's why you're here
in the first place... I dont like these lines; but the rest is lovely especially the last line:
We'll always have each other.
Keep penning
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very powerfull love poem, at the start of it, it sounded like you didn't care for them but as you move further through the poem you think why is this happening? and right up to the end you don't know that you still have each other, just like a love plan. very powerfull and full of emotion make you feel lost when your reading it. i like this one alot.
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Wow, this is quite the write. It's deep, intense, twisted and a little disturbing...lol, but all in a good well composed piece. Thank you for sharing. This is awesome.
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Hey man...!!! you are surely a great poet and I love the amazing write..the imagery is beautiful and strong and is very deep!! it rhymed good too at some places which was the best part..The lyrics make this one of more importance and this one is just amazing.
this is a great job, and i look forward to read more of yours. ANd do take a look at my work too, i wud be very thankful to u for this act of kindness best of luck for more!!!
God bless,
Love,
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This is really interesting...and rather frightening to me. It has an interesting twist of emotions. This is really good.
Midnight -
Wow this is such an intense write. You can definitely feel the emotions and see the actions as they take place. Very nicely done with this one. Good luck with your contests!
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WOAH... thats really good. Nice job. you NAILED it.
~Pandy-Sama -
I really like how you have this set up. its so easy to read and just flows really smoothly. I really liked the lines:
No pleasure without sacrifice
No glory without shame
No you without me
There will always be a me without you
They just stuck out the most to me. This was a really powerful poem. You did a fantastic job. I really enjoyed reading this. Great job and thank you for entering it into the contest. -
this is a great poem. it really describes the doubts that comes to loving. this is a powerful meaning, all right. blissful cheers for you!
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wow this is truly an amazing write. there is so much emotion and underlying meaning. A very strong and powerful poem. I love the language that you used and the flow.
thanks for entering and goodlcuk -
No you without me.
There will always be a me without you.
great lines. i was wondering what option you used...if you could let me know that would be great.
♥Chaos -
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Thank you! Oops, sorry! I used Option 1 and these lines:
-im not who you think i am
-things arent the way they were before;;you wouldn't even recognize me anymore
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