Why do I feel this way?
Nothing wrong happened,
nothing ever got to me.
Why is this happening today?
I know what's wrong.
I couldn't do it.
She was right there in my arms,
I guess I'm not that strong.
Why do other guys have this?
They don't fear what her reaction will be,
or if they'll feel the magic or not.
Why do they always get the kiss?
What about me?
I'm the one who worries if I'm going too fast,
or if she'll hate me afterwards.
Why don't I get that guarantee?
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked this. I love your written works. I love the questions you ask yourself through out most of your poems. Good write.
"I know what's wrong.
I couldn't do it.
She was right there in my arms,
I guess I'm not that strong."
favorite stanza. later.
-Jenn
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You are gifted with....
the motive to produce a great story I love it sweet heart. I have been depressed the last 3 days and I just finally wrote something its called " My Rhythm Verses His Blues" It's okay. but you I want to read more buy you. hugs
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Impressive write
Oh its sometimes best to be sure. And not jump in to some thing like a relationship. You are yound when love comes you will know. Then you will feel real jealousy. (Lisa)
"Why do other guys have this?
They don't fear what her reaction will be,
or if they'll feel the magic or not.
Why do they always get the kiss?"
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