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My Retreat

I feel so numb.
My mind has gone wild.
Thoughts flow through my head,
that I know I shouldn't think.
I need my retreat.

My music and my books
are my home when I feel alone.
Then there's my mom, dad, and best friend.
Plus I'll never forget the one I love.
They make me feel complete.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    I felt.......

    a sense of some sorta depression are sadness but i must say this i like how you went very traight to the point with this write. great job.


  • Olivias Violin
    May 12, 2007

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    "My music and my books
    are my home when I feel alone." - I like that

    It's good that you appreciate your loved ones.

  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    May 12, 2007
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    Nice Write

    hello! this piece you wrote is a nice piece. I have just formed a group called The Beginning of Essence from this piece i think you qualify for my vision. i want you to become a member. think about it.